I think the girls one definately looks brighter. I've uploaded the new boys one to my article - on my computer I compared both old and new versions and they looked pretty similar. We don't have much good light at the moment do we !!
I think it's fine though - the detail shows through and that's the most important thing.
At some point I would like to remove the border but the slightly darker corners will give the game away so there wouldn't be any advantage at the mo.
They are just soooo brilliant though - I don't know how you have found the time. Not many artists feature male dancers but you've captured the positions perfectly.
Actually, I've got another challenge for you.... but that's for later ! And - I think it's going to press next week so will let you have a .pdf if I can work out how to contact you !
reworked sketches - hopefully improving the lightness.
I have tried to get the colour and brightness on these better.My photography skills need improving!S
ReplyDeleteHi Sarah,
ReplyDeleteI think the girls one definately looks brighter. I've uploaded the new boys one to my article - on my computer I compared both old and new versions and they looked pretty similar. We don't have much good light at the moment do we !!
I think it's fine though - the detail shows through and that's the most important thing.
At some point I would like to remove the border but the slightly darker corners will give the game away so there wouldn't be any advantage at the mo.
They are just soooo brilliant though - I don't know how you have found the time. Not many artists feature male dancers but you've captured the positions perfectly.
Actually, I've got another challenge for you.... but that's for later !
And - I think it's going to press next week so will let you have a .pdf if I can work out how to contact you !